Hello everyone! In writing we did a 💯 word story, and it was pretty hard. First we had to plan it out completely, then we had to write a story and edit it to make it 💯 words. It was smaller than I expected. The hardest part was editing it to make it super small. It's down below!
Turn on screen reader support Splash! Splash! Amazon ran through the muddy jungle, her feet dropping with a squelch into the soft mud. “Come on Zuri!” she shouted. A white tiger appeared through the hibiscus bush. The trees trembled as Zuri roared. A while later they were tracking with their muddy feet as they trenched around trees. “Zuri, I think we’re lost..” sighed Amazon. They found a cave and they sheltered there for the night. Amazon found a village in the middle of the jungle.. “Zuri! This is my village!” she said. Zuri roared. They built a huge house and they both lived there happily.
Blog you later,
💮🌁Bhargavi🌁💮
Hi, Bhargavi. I enjoyed the pace of your story, particularly how you got us straight into the action. Could you envision expanding this story further? Ahiahi marie.
ReplyDeleteHi Bhargavi, I enjoyed the description of your story. You writed your story very well. Maybe next time you could write another interesting 100 word story. How long did this take you?. Blog you later! -Castiel- 26.8.21
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