Hi, Bhargavi. An intriguing way to write the story! By using first person and present tense, you have made it so that we really don't know if the protagonist will survive this, which adds an edge of excitement. Are you really going to continue this?
Hello Bhargavi Nice job on writing about Auckland volcanoes they are amazing and your writing is to,Maybe you can try finding facts about when a volcano will erupt soon but Tino pai good work...
Hi, Bhargavi. An intriguing way to write the story!
ReplyDeleteBy using first person and present tense, you have made it so that we really don't know if the protagonist will survive this, which adds an edge of excitement.
Are you really going to continue this?
Hello Bhargavi
ReplyDeleteNice job on writing about Auckland volcanoes they are amazing and your writing is to,Maybe you can try finding facts about when a volcano will erupt soon but Tino pai good work...